Good work with the editing...ure palcing the relevent sections.together...maybe a suggestion to add more punch to the clips is to accentuate it with texts clips in between or inside the video clips for new audience..

Eg when the ex senator walks bonacci around the perimeter...thats the first place john de camp is introduced to.in the doc...his importance is not known to the audience..him being an ex state senator in charge of the investigation ... In the original john de camps introduction included him working with caradori .. If u could lay out inside the video clip..this fact ..and in the next video clip lace it with other texts..u have an alternative parallel commentary...for the audience..the newer ones... In the original one john de camps intro ..had a punch ..his description of the crime of institutions being corrupted from within...and the use of children as drug mules..child rape rings..and worse. ... The original one had me physically sick for about a week..and was the main reason that got me researching the legal.matrix...till then i was heing entertained by jfk and 9/11 alt media coopted repeatss.. The legal matrix opened my eyes to people looking for a solution ..by first understanding the root of the system..this understanding has evolved over the years eventhough it has been infiltrated..and diverted many a time... I always refer people who scoff at the alt media and challenge them to watch the conspiracy of silence... The intro hits them like a brick.. ..anyway good work so far..hope.u can take my suggestion for ur next edits. I would givve u suggestion on the legal matrix..but people.i realise ..dont want solutions..just want to be entertained and horrified..